Thursday, March 12, 2009
paper 2 introduction
Plays, art, sculptures and artifacts allow let people go back in time and see how people lived, loved and lost. Museums, art galleries and theaters are places people can go to get away from the outside world and step into another world that they have dreamed of. Second Life offers these escapes as well, without leaving the comfort of their own home. Thearters, museums, and art galleries provide people with history and enterainment and a unique view of life that they my never have thougth of.
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pretty good jake...a couple of instances of dangling modifiers...ending a sentence with "of" instead of writing "of which"...etc...revise a bit but other than that, nice job...
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